tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post4430755218211525240..comments2024-03-26T11:14:00.710-07:00Comments on The Pen And Ink Blog: Revision ProcessThe Pen and Ink Blogspothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01709195512534318571noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-19222836165023844502010-04-18T09:49:31.197-07:002010-04-18T09:49:31.197-07:00Lori - My colleagues at Pen & Ink read every a...Lori - My colleagues at Pen & Ink read every agonizing word of Medicine Boy and write productive comments. <br /><br />Janet - I wanted to illuminated the craft side of writing as oppose to the illicit carnal activites associate with the glamorous writer life-style.The Pen and Ink Blogspothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709195512534318571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-13360484489803115402010-04-17T21:15:31.692-07:002010-04-17T21:15:31.692-07:00If they only knew. Every aspiring writer should t...If they only knew. Every aspiring writer should take this to heart.Janet S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11473549444328276315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-18780775375778299332010-04-17T21:02:12.044-07:002010-04-17T21:02:12.044-07:00Ha, ha regarding the respecting your writing. Fun...Ha, ha regarding the respecting your writing. Fun post, but Rilla is right. Medicine Boy rocks! I'm glad you're still revising it.Lori W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15513938828806159874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-10198517125591095582010-04-17T17:46:46.535-07:002010-04-17T17:46:46.535-07:00Rilla, I respect my writing in the morning.
Lupe ...Rilla, I respect my writing in the morning.<br /><br />Lupe F.The Pen and Ink Blogspothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709195512534318571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-39784336099174328302010-04-17T14:05:42.652-07:002010-04-17T14:05:42.652-07:00Are those tear smudges I detect a the top? And who...Are those tear smudges I detect a the top? And who took a bite out of the lower right corner? Hmm. If I were your manuscript, I don't think I'd be coming back for more of that treatment. And the worms make it look as if you pulled it out of the composting bin. Lupe! Your writing deserves more respect! I know. I've read it.rilla jaggiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259015787424108654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-82948463002315546372010-04-17T13:15:25.759-07:002010-04-17T13:15:25.759-07:00Julie - only hundred more traumatic pages to go.
...Julie - only hundred more traumatic pages to go.<br /><br />Lupe F.The Pen and Ink Blogspothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709195512534318571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-25775047126442912102010-04-17T13:04:19.792-07:002010-04-17T13:04:19.792-07:00Now that is a gritty, realistic look! Thanks for ...Now that is a gritty, realistic look! Thanks for sharing your traumatized page.Julie Musilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02150454913885915017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-86585665841355430522010-04-17T10:10:15.835-07:002010-04-17T10:10:15.835-07:00Susanne, I now make notes on notecards to remind m...Susanne, I now make notes on notecards to remind me about my notes. Thanks for patronizing Pen & Ink.<br /><br />Lupe F.The Pen and Ink Blogspothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709195512534318571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-81057557107833660922010-04-17T08:29:25.091-07:002010-04-17T08:29:25.091-07:00As long as you can read and understand what all th...As long as you can read and understand what all the notes mean, that work of art will one day be a part of a finished YA manuscript.<br />Thanks for sharing a glimpse into your revision.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-58498989643909584432010-04-16T10:27:45.199-07:002010-04-16T10:27:45.199-07:00Thanks Tricia. Looks Neo Classical Post Modern Imp...Thanks Tricia. Looks Neo Classical Post Modern Impressionistic Information Age with a dash of Gustave Dore.<br /><br />Lupe F.The Pen and Ink Blogspothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709195512534318571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8226553632363517570.post-70927365926096455752010-04-16T10:25:00.276-07:002010-04-16T10:25:00.276-07:00It's a work of art. ;)It's a work of art. ;)Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.com